Description: i wrote this one when i was feeling really low after some really bad news that i cudn't handle you can probably tell what i was doing at the time plz leave comments it will help me with my next poems thnx x
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To make my pain go away
I pull this blade down my veins
And let the blade take control
I no
Nothing will hurt me anymore...
And as I bleed letting my feelings out
my heart begins to scream and shout
So I write this and start to cry
Then for the last time I close my eyes.
im not quite sure what happened that made you cut...but try to help yourself through it. "Nothing will hurt me anymore... And as I cut letting my feelings out"
i think that you should try to put a better word than cut there. but otherwise, marvelous poem.
Submission Name: To the end
