Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: BOOBSdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 264/243/147
    Words: 176
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
    Total Views: 559
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 960



    Description:
       THIS SORTA CAME OUT OF NOWHERE i think it is somewhat based on my life but there are peices from other woman i have talked to i was in the plastic surgeons office once and this woman just turned to me like we both belonged to a secret club she had tears in her eyes as she related her story and i thought WOW they are just boobs how can they change your life then it happened to me hope you guys like it


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsBOOBSdots
    -------------------------------------------



    Never was well endowed ,even for a larger built girl .
    I have never been huge but wouldnít want to be skinny .
    Tiny girls look a lil fragile to me .
    I thought of what my friends would think ,my family, my preacher.
    The decision was all together too easy in the end.
    I found myself the best surgeon.
    I placed each breast in his well tuned hands.
    I drifted into a chemical sleep sure I was going to wake up new.
    And I did
    Well I think I did I donít remember waking up really .
    Just yesterday I squeezed into my finest leather tank .
    I pulled on my favorite jeans and got in my black muscle car.
    At a stop light I re applied my lipstick ,trailer park red.
    It came to me just then suddenly really
    I have become someone I always was but couldnít be .
    I used to want to be different like everybody else .
    Now I am different but still myself.




    Submitted on 2005-09-03 19:58:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      I just had to read this with a name like "Boobs", LOL.. this is really good and I got a chuckle out of it. My friend just got new boobs and I tease her all the time about them,, in fun of course, I had to touch them, squeeze them, see them.. Wow, strange. from a double A to double D.. it was quite different for me to see her so big. About the skinny girls and over weight ones. I don't know if you've heard this before, but there's a prayer: "Dear Lord, if you won't make me skinny, then make all of my friends fat" LOL,, I love that. All in all.. I really liked this poem and you written it with great humor and fun!!!....Molly
    | Posted on 2006-08-12 00:00:00 | by Molly Densmore | [ Reply to This ]
      i'm assuming u got implants?...the title just caught me and reeled me in. typical male i guess. anyway this one was funny but serious at the same time. good write.
    | Posted on 2005-09-03 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      you go girl! this is cute and funny too. guess all girls have this in common, since they seem to define who we are these days.
    men used to love us for who we are but now we must be more than we can be!
    | Posted on 2005-09-03 00:00:00 | by MMISS | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    73033

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    To Be written by MyPeriodical
    One day older, One year wiser. written by Rhythmal
    Survive ed - right back at the beginning written by MyPeriodical
    Labor Pains written by MyPeriodical
    Meditations one written by MyPeriodical
    The annointed one is persecuted. written by MyPeriodical
    written by Daniel Barlow
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Human Progression written by ForgottenGraves
    written by Daniel Barlow
    written by Daniel Barlow
    written by Daniel Barlow
    written by Daniel Barlow
    That Kind of Love Never Brought Me Flowers written by Jazzy
    written by Daniel Barlow
    written by Daniel Barlow
    untitled written by MyPeriodical
    not alone written by Daniel Barlow
    Release written by robbie
    A Donde Llegamos written by MyPeriodical
    Scared written by MyPeriodical
    Remember written by MyPeriodical
    I am still sorry. written by MyPeriodical
    Legends written by poetotoe
    Sanctimony written by MyPeriodical
    Chasing The Lie written by jackz
    Heroína written by MyPeriodical
    Canalizar written by MyPeriodical
    In God's Name written by poetotoe
    written by Daniel Barlow

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry