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    dots Submission Name: BOOBSdots

    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 264/243/147
    Words: 176
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
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       THIS SORTA CAME OUT OF NOWHERE i think it is somewhat based on my life but there are peices from other woman i have talked to i was in the plastic surgeons office once and this woman just turned to me like we both belonged to a secret club she had tears in her eyes as she related her story and i thought WOW they are just boobs how can they change your life then it happened to me hope you guys like it

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    Never was well endowed ,even for a larger built girl .
    I have never been huge but wouldn’t want to be skinny .
    Tiny girls look a lil fragile to me .
    I thought of what my friends would think ,my family, my preacher.
    The decision was all together too easy in the end.
    I found myself the best surgeon.
    I placed each breast in his well tuned hands.
    I drifted into a chemical sleep sure I was going to wake up new.
    And I did
    Well I think I did I don’t remember waking up really .
    Just yesterday I squeezed into my finest leather tank .
    I pulled on my favorite jeans and got in my black muscle car.
    At a stop light I re applied my lipstick ,trailer park red.
    It came to me just then suddenly really
    I have become someone I always was but couldn’t be .
    I used to want to be different like everybody else .
    Now I am different but still myself.

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      I just had to read this with a name like "Boobs", LOL.. this is really good and I got a chuckle out of it. My friend just got new boobs and I tease her all the time about them,, in fun of course, I had to touch them, squeeze them, see them.. Wow, strange. from a double A to double D.. it was quite different for me to see her so big. About the skinny girls and over weight ones. I don't know if you've heard this before, but there's a prayer: "Dear Lord, if you won't make me skinny, then make all of my friends fat" LOL,, I love that. All in all.. I really liked this poem and you written it with great humor and fun!!!....Molly
    | Posted on 2006-08-12 00:00:00 | by Molly Densmore | [ Reply to This ]
      i'm assuming u got implants?...the title just caught me and reeled me in. typical male i guess. anyway this one was funny but serious at the same time. good write.
    | Posted on 2005-09-03 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      you go girl! this is cute and funny too. guess all girls have this in common, since they seem to define who we are these days.
    men used to love us for who we are but now we must be more than we can be!
    | Posted on 2005-09-03 00:00:00 | by MMISS | [ Reply to This ]

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