Description: Heh... This is about a dear friend of mine... My father doesn't like him much, calls him Hippie. He wrote me a poem and it's on my wall. I read it the other day, and realized i haven't seen him since the middle of summer... Hm. He was cool for the time, and we did end up getting together again, but the poem still stand, cause when we're apart, I still miss him. Not really meant for critique, because, it's pretty short...
This had alot of potential for such a small write..I am goin to add this to my favorites for secret personal reasonsO.o unknown to most on ES and most in general...thnx man this fits into my existance is all imma say. ~silentXtoke
I so love the short ones. You've written this really well. It's very challenging to get so much emotion across in a few lines... I know cause I keep trying :-) The images are clear with just the right amount of emotion creeping through. Great write.
Well, I like this a lot because it's so minimalistic (I'm the resident minimalist around here), but you don't an apostrophe on yours because it's possessive as it is. The papercut reference sounds vaguely Cobainish. Peace and love, Amy
Aww that is so sweet and so sad. I would have cried if I wasnt on so many anti-depressants. It's short, but perfect as it is. I love the length. It's amazing what you can say in only a few lines. I could feel all the emotion you put in to this. Beautiful wording. Great job