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    dots Submission Name: Destroy Me With Decisions...dots
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    Author: PsychoBabble214
    ASL Info:    18/female
    Elite Ratio:    4.52 - 103/109/29
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1035
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    Bytes: 795



    Description:
       i dont know exactly what brought it on... i was just laying there, thinking alone... and the phrase "a heart is made of curves, not edges that kill." popped into my head...tell me what you think.


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    dotsDestroy Me With Decisions...dots
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    A heart is made of curves
    Not jagged edges that can kill
    Pierce it open, drain it dry
    And I wait for it to refill

    I long and I need
    Until I'm strangled with desire
    My body burns with it
    Getting less than required

    When it's gone, I ache
    Like a blade removed; I bleed
    Slice open the red, pulse inside
    Release all desire, all need

    Blood filled passion
    Salt filled tears
    Lonely days pass
    Soon to be years

    Red is desire
    Black is pain
    Grey is broken hearted
    Emotions I canít contain

    My heart is not a weapon
    Nor is it a toy
    Itís human nature to loveÖ
    And human to destroy





    Submitted on 2005-09-03 21:15:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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