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Submission Name: Can't Stop! dots

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Author:	fallen_angel384
ASL Info:	17/Female/uk
Elite Ratio:	3.26 - 59/87/22
Words:	95

Class/Type:	Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
Total Views:	321
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	592

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Can't Stop! dots

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my blood starts to drip
a puddle has formed
i need to get out
because i'm starting a storm
i want to stop
i really have tried
but it gets harder and harder
as each day goes by
i have a mindful of
guilt secrets and lies
i'm always sad
but no one ever sees me cry
as i cut deeper and deeper
into my skin
tears slide down my cheeks
and sadness kicks in
tomorrow i might
finish this terrible deed
but just for this moment
i'll sit here and bleed

Submitted on 2005-09-04 07:07:56 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i think splifford needs to get a sharp razor and stick it up his... oke.. well, i like it becuase its a true poem, its what you feel and its what you know, i know how cutting goes.. i've cut for all but.. ooh about all BUT 5 years of my life and i know how it goes... anything from razors, to glass, to pencils, to fingernails, to nails, to even a dull putty knife..
i hope you get the will to stop.. id ont know why, so far i hanvnt found a reason but im still tryin to.. probably cus the stupid questions i get about the scars... they're really hard to hide
till next time
peace
danielle
| Posted on 2005-09-17 00:00:00 | by sacred_tears | [ Reply to This ]
  "cut my nose off, despite my face." these mutilation poems are a disgrace. your scars are somekind of fad, just to prove you are mad.
| Posted on 2005-09-12 00:00:00 | by splifford | [ Reply to This ]
  I love this. Everything about it is really good. I think most people can relate. My favorite part is the end:

"tomorrow i might
finish this terrible deed
but just for this moment
i'll sit here and bleed"

I can't even describe how much I like that. I couldn't help but notice that pretty much all of your poems are about cutting. I know what it's like, I used to do it all the time. But then I got tired of wearing long sleeves (even in the summer) so I stopped cause i hated the scars. I know we don't exactly know eachother, but if you ever need to talk, I am always willing to listen Great job! PeaCe

-nikkki
| Posted on 2005-09-10 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]
  I love it..its amazing and expresses the feelings of a cutter/self-mutilator very well. nice job...i love it. keep writing, youve got talent

<3 adalae
| Posted on 2005-09-06 00:00:00 | by lifeNsoul1224 | [ Reply to This ]
  Great write. The flow, ryhimg, all that was pretty good. I can relate too. I know the feelings when you cut just want to make ya cup all the way to the bone. Anyway keep up the good work.

>:D
| Posted on 2005-09-04 00:00:00 | by skullreaperX_X | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow I completely agree with skullreaperX_X. This poem is really good. It has great flow and you express the emotions really well.

Selene
| Posted on 2005-09-04 00:00:00 | by Selene | [ Reply to This ]

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