crush us again -------------------------------------------
how could i tell you what it was like
to jump up and see my life was a lie
no more friendly handshakes
no more time with you
so many things i hated but you always made me late
i realized to late just how soft your words were
you whispered goodbye but thats not what i heard
the sound of a million breaking hearts
of crying sobs and faithless love,, heard all above it all
it took so much of my blood to make me see
i took so much of your love you couldnt breathe
im so sorry for hurting you so much
but i need you now
i need it to be just us..
so long i looked but didnt see
what the world had set infront of me
a quiet boy with saddened eyes
holds it all in instead of crying
he silenty wishes me die it seems
my shaking fingers run there path
across your worn and bloody lap
i pause and wish it wasnt so
i wish it wasnt as it seems
i wish you didnt do this to me
love was something i shouldnt need
now its got me on my knees
so broken yet so full of hope
i choke on this tender thing
i hope you shake this sickness from me
Love is such a complicated thing that seems to hold as much bad as it does good. You felt so much pain over this, and it really comes through in this work. I am sorry you had to go through this, but we all do, it seems. This is a gorgeous piece of work, I hope things are alright now.
this is indeed very descent.the first tow sentences in each stanza stood out so much for me,that i started singing this,arount the 3rd stanza=cool i also felt you in what you were writing,and thats always apperciated. this has the makes for an awsome write,with a little tweaking,if this is important to you. dont change the first 2 sentences(lol)and expand upon that.
Submission Name: crush us again
