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    dots Submission Name: Rejectiondots
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    Author: AngelintheRain
    ASL Info:    22/f/MN
    Elite Ratio:    3.45 - 36/52/16
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 849
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    Bytes: 540



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       What are you looking for in terms of feedback? Any background information behind the piece? Hints? Is this just to vent? Emotional state while writing?


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    It&#8217;s like sitting in a room
    Painted in mirrors
    It&#8217;s like lying in the moonlight
    And getting a tan
    It&#8217;s like narcolepsy
    It&#8217;s like finding a treasure map
    When you&#8217;re lost
    It&#8217;s like swallowing crushed glass
    Pulling your own teeth or
    Breaking your own bones
    It&#8217;s like slamming a jet into a brick wall
    And living through it
    It&#8217;s finding out the world is flat
    By falling off.




    Submitted on 2005-09-04 22:50:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      well, you've definitely described the feeling (which by the way gets easier after enough times of going through it) although it's never pleasant. I try to think of it this way: the person who is rejecting you is thinking more about protecting his own feelings; therefore he's not thinking about yours. just don't take it personally and move on to someone who does think more about your feelings. nice write here!
    | Posted on 2005-09-05 00:00:00 | by sierramuse8 | [ Reply to This ]


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