Im in a hurry so i could not finish this poem 'properly'
I'll give a proper description tomorow and repost it...
In Dreams -------------------------------------------
Whilst you were sleeping
i had a thought
if you were dreaming
of me or not
or were you dreaming
of times we had shared
peacefully resting
and dreaming
in bed
You must have been dreaming
of running away,
your face looked quite troubled
your skin looked so pale
the sickness took over
you began to sweat
you were hardly breathing
i thought you were dead
I never awoke you
from your rancid dream
just watching you made me
feel quite serene
I waited and waited
till first mornings light
your knightmares subsided
a smile on your lips
you looked so peacefull
in your dreams
I waited for hours
untill you awoke
you looked into my eyes
smiled and spoke
the words that you spoke
that morning to me
you told me that you
were dreaming of me.
awww that was a really sweet poem. I really liked the rhythym it had. at a couple of points it was a tad off but that could also be how I am reading it too
for some reason I really like this little but:
I waited for hours untill you awoke you lookied into my eyes smiled and spoke
Submission Name: In Dreams
