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    dots Submission Name: Razor!dots
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    Author: fallen_angel384
    ASL Info:    17/Female/uk
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 59/87/22
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 225
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    Bytes: 437



    Description:
       i wrote this earlier today when i had no-one to talk to and i was having an argument wiv my best friend and my BF was pissed wiv me :(


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    dotsRazor!dots
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    as i look at this razorblade,
    painful memories flood back like tears,
    thinking about the life i live,
    and how this would end all fears.

    as i lay here alone,
    these thoughts come to mind,
    i seek a place,
    i know i'll never find.

    so now the pain is cutting through me,
    like a thousand knives,
    i no,
    what i'm about to do is gonna be right.




    Submitted on 2005-09-05 14:01:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Give us more detail, if you don't it makes the piece seem like more of a venting than art, please keep writing, i'd like to hear more, but examine all areas of this subject to find out why you feel this way, the underlying reason, not the obvious reason. Even i myself can improve, so try not to take this as a trashing of your work :-)
    | Posted on 2005-09-06 00:00:00 | by Martin S. Allen | [ Reply to This ]
      Honestly, I understand you're venting, but the cutting and suicide is something you have got to get away from, i used to cut, but i'm glad i don't anymore but i still hurt myself, it's not a good thing, that's why i write hoping it will help as much as it can
    | Posted on 2005-09-06 00:00:00 | by swayingbox | [ Reply to This ]



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