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    dots Submission Name: Pretty please?dots
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    Author: aletha_409
    ASL Info:    19/F/Kansas
    Elite Ratio:    4.43 - 34/41/10
    Words: 27
    Class/Type: Limerick/Happy
    Total Views: 341
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 181



    Description:
       I thought I'd try my hand at limericks, as I've never written one before. And I think I'll try to go back to that. Hmmm.


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    dotsPretty please?dots
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    See the sharp edge of my knife?
    Your fear is wonderfully rife.
    I'd enjoy using it
    If you're refusing it.
    I'll trade you a wallet for life.




    Submitted on 2005-09-05 14:46:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      I don't know what a limerick is but I liked that. It was interesting. A bit confusing but is was great. I think it was about a mugger in a dark alley way. I liked it it brought cool images to my head. I don't know if you did it right or anything b/c I don't know what it is but I like it for what that's worth. . .
    | Posted on 2005-09-05 00:00:00 | by Raineyes | [ Reply to This ]
      Positively sociopathic... in a good way. No, really, in a good way... You know, the goodway! I just don't think I'd like to run into you in a dark alley or anything! LOL
    | Posted on 2005-09-05 00:00:00 | by grey_girl | [ Reply to This ]



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