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Pretty please?


Author: aletha_409
ASL Info:    19/F/Kansas
Elite Ratio:    4.41 - 34 /41 /11
Words: 27
Class/Type: Limerick /Happy
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I thought I'd try my hand at limericks, as I've never written one before. And I think I'll try to go back to that. Hmmm.


Pretty please?



See the sharp edge of my knife?
Your fear is wonderfully rife.
I'd enjoy using it
If you're refusing it.
I'll trade you a wallet for life.




Submitted on 2005-09-05 14:46:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I don't know what a limerick is but I liked that. It was interesting. A bit confusing but is was great. I think it was about a mugger in a dark alley way. I liked it it brought cool images to my head. I don't know if you did it right or anything b/c I don't know what it is but I like it for what that's worth. . .
| Posted on 2005-09-05 00:00:00 | by Raineyes | [ Reply to This ]
  Positively sociopathic... in a good way. No, really, in a good way... You know, the goodway! I just don't think I'd like to run into you in a dark alley or anything! LOL
| Posted on 2005-09-05 00:00:00 | by grey_girl | [ Reply to This ]


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