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    dots Submission Name: another quotedots
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    Author: musclebound350
    ASL Info:    26/male
    Elite Ratio:    4.87 - 197/202/70
    Words: 14
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Depressed
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    The silence within this atmosphere sends me off to a spaced state of mind.




    Submitted on 2005-09-06 11:20:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      it's a re occuring feeling really isn't it...
    silence... happens everyday, if it were my quote i think i would try to add that sense that it is a re occuring thing so instead of "The silence within this atmosphere sends me off to a spaced state of mind." perhaps i would make it the silence within this atmosphere sends me off, yet again to a spaced state of mind. Just an idea. cool quote though... don't think ive come acroos anyone who posts quotes yet... think urself special for being the first ive found. *winks*
    take care
    *thoughts*~jeni
    | Posted on 2006-01-10 00:00:00 | by thoughts | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmmm...! Very interesting quote! I can understand this in my own sense as to when you are in a relationship and there is tension and neither person wants to say anything, it is more comfortable a moment to drift your mind off somewhere else. Or, it is easier to think and reflect when surrounded in silence. Either way I like it! Take care!

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2005-09-06 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]


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