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    dots Submission Name: Katrina's Wakedots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Prayers and love for all those affected by Katrina - throughout the Gulf Coast.

    It's a real wake up call, for us in the US, I believe, because we can mobilize most quickly to head to foreign shores but are lacking when it comes to hurrying to the rescue of our own.

    We can all help - prayers, donations of food, $, clothing, baby goods, etc.

    Love,Peace,Joy!!! tif ; )

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    dotsKatrina's Wakedots

    Mother Nature
    Love for
    we find
    there is no
    Be together ~
    Body, Soul
    See government
    the ties
    which bind
    Multitudes starve
    while few have
    Who will seek
    Who is left

    Submitted on 2005-09-06 11:46:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      if anything mother nature has shown us the da real boss is, she's slapped us with hurricanes and storm out da ass lately. this was well writen and i even liked the format that is was written in.
    | Posted on 2005-09-06 00:00:00 | by withblindedeyez | [ Reply to This ]
      I know that I speak for all in the UK in extending our deepest sympathy, thoughts and prayers for all who suffered in Kartina's wake. One can only imagine what these people have gone through. Many lessons to be learnt here Tiff. Mother Nature is a very harsh teacher. A lovely write straight from your heart.
    | Posted on 2005-09-06 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      Mother Nature is certainly a reminder to us that we are all in this together.. helping each other in such difficult times is what it is all about. in such a country rich with resources, it is a tragedy that people starve and die every day. thank you for the reminder that something has to change soon, we must come together in humanity and love and care.

    stay golden sweet lady,
    | Posted on 2005-09-06 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      Nicely written and said, sadly it also marks the sept. 11th attacks all within 2 weeks wonder when will it all stop, good write though keep it up peace & stay safe...
    | Posted on 2005-09-06 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]
      Absolutely incredible... if it wasnt going to be you, it was going to be me. Someone had to write about this unforgiven tragedy. It was a devistating event that took turn when it swiped those in the city of New Orleans. It was a catagory 5 and was one of the worst they had seen in their history of natural disasters. your poem had so much depth...I drowned. I'm admirably thankful you created a work of art.
    good to know someone cares.
    -Much love, Sharon
    | Posted on 2005-09-06 00:00:00 | by SavedDragon | [ Reply to This ]
      I like the way you structured this and especially the lines 'there is no/ separate/ kind'...indeed. Good work here. Nothing I'd change.


    | Posted on 2005-09-07 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]

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