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    dots Submission Name: Don't testdots

    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 700
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    dotsDon't testdots

    you've fucked with me
    Since like the age of 3
    your the fuckin reason that I be
    Smoking weed
    Don't test me
    I"m gonna have to smoke a hole tree
    That'll have to get rid of my stress for atleast a week

    The stress and depression, it's gotta go away
    you know I love you, But all this shit you say
    It's gotta stop
    or it'll be your face to drop
    on a stop
    sign all in your grill don't fuck with me
    don't wanna find your dead body up in a tree
    so if you test,
    Be ready to be laid to rest

    Submitted on 2005-09-06 21:09:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this one was okay. i'm not a real big fan of battle rapping although i do it every once in a while. that is what this reminds me of. i can't lie though...this one had my blood pumping. i can see this being payed with a tight ass beat and making u wanna fight anybody who fUcks with u.
    | Posted on 2005-09-21 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      i like yyour lyrics it's shows relaness and a lot of deep emotions it kinda caght me off guard at first but thats okay all i would probaly say is that you coauld do a little better with flow . some words were ryhmin gjust to be doing it but overall i liked it i wish i could hear it
    | Posted on 2005-09-09 00:00:00 | by Jamie06 | [ Reply to This ]
      You know your work is on point! Stop tripin roll that L up. I wonder why people not commenting, well fu*k um. keep up the good work :)
    | Posted on 2005-09-07 00:00:00 | by SingleRose | [ Reply to This ]
      wow...i dont see why people didnt comment on them...this is good!im so happy to be the forst!yeay! i like it...who was u talkin about? its very emotional and aggressive..idk if i spelled that right...but u get me...anyways luv ya babes!

    | Posted on 2005-09-06 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]

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