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Summer Romance

Author: AmandaLyn
ASL Info:    18/F/ Centralia
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Words: 154
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Iwrote this in the middle of the summer when Lance said he was gonna dump me after the end of the summer since I would be gone a state away at college. It made me pretty mad.

Summer Romance

You turned my life upside down,
but I love you anyway.
Now you wanna throw it all away
and you think it’s all ok.

I gave up everything just to be with you
But you don’t even care for me
I was all I could be,
Why can’t you love me?

What did I ever mean to you?
Did I mean anything at all?
I was your Summer Romance,
Time to move on for fall.
Just one more dance - my last chance
To get you to stay for more
More than a summer romance.

Now I lie awake at night thinking
Of ways to make you stay
I’m running our of days
And I still don’t know what to say.

I loved you since our first kiss
I love everything about you
I love everything you do
I’d love it if you loved me too.

Submitted on 2005-09-06 23:47:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Now i wouldn't dare tell what you should do with Lance, mostly because i don't know him at all and have no rright to say a word. See sometime people push a person they love away just to save thier own feeling,even though it not even close to what they truly want. I have faith in you and what you decide him or anyone,because you are wise beyond your years.

Yes the poem did have a lots of drama, but the feelings raw and true ,which what I love about poetry.

| Posted on 2005-10-06 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ]
  I feel a sense of though you feel you did something to push him away. Or that you feel something must be wrond with you for him to leave you. Dating dilemma 101...

Unfortunately, this is what happens when we put our focus on anyone other than God. We become so wrapped up in how we feel when the other person is near us, that we forget that all we need to complete us is God, and that we can never appreciate the love of another until we learn to love with Christ's love.

Hopefully, you've realized this or will realize it. I'll be praying for you Amanda!

| Posted on 2005-09-19 00:00:00 | by Amberkins | [ Reply to This ]
  And you still want to be with this jerk??! Awesome, indeed. Why do you want to be with him when he doesn't want to be with you. Don't you want to be with someone who loves you back in the same uncomplicated way?!

Move on, kid! There are MUCH better guys around.
| Posted on 2005-09-07 00:00:00 | by vedanta19 | [ Reply to This ]

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