Very moving. I think I can begin to fathom the idea but it's very abstract between the lines. All except the emotions that are very vivid. It's all wrapped around one simple motive - a white cotton dress but it's really much deeper. Excellent.
At least what I get from this, is that it's one that's innocence has been taken. Rape. And if so, it's a very sad, yet truth telling of such an event. You write it well, and it's touching, as well as wrenching. I like how you kept the focus on the white cotton dress. Very nice. You write well, I hope to read more from you.
If this is what I think it is about it is absolutely disturbing. I hope this is not something that has happened to you, and if so, I am very sorry. This piece was so full of sadness, it broke my heart as I read it and put a knot in my stomach. Besides the meaning of the poem, it was perfectly written. I could feel so much emotion as I read it. Great job on this piece. Keep up the good work! Alissa