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    dots Submission Name: The wisdom of knowledgedots
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    Author: bilal anaim
    ASL Info:    45/M/Philadelphia
    Elite Ratio:    2.34 - 237/256/102
    Words: 215
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsThe wisdom of knowledgedots
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    To mankind knowledge is
    a shining star in a dark night
    Wisdom is the power to keep
    the future looking bright

    Unfortunetly life is not as it seems
    black and white
    If knowledge and wisdom to be auctioned
    on an eBay website

    With all the volumes to read
    and all the ink to write
    Knowledge without wisdom is worth
    less than a paper kite

    The wisdom of knowledge
    makes the poor very uptight
    A heavy chain with no gain
    but anger, and pain ready to ignite

    What is learning without luck?
    A poor-devil's plight
    As likely on a doomsday
    to draw another bill at sight

    How poorly indeed life
    is the poor's struggle for a lost fight
    Living on the street with summer's heat
    scared day, and night

    Getting old in winter's cold
    where the fire is the only delight
    Sleeping with thugs, surrounded by dogs,
    all waiting for a bite

    Ironically when the poor complain
    about the wrong civil right
    Non pities, or care to help
    because the rich is always right

    The wisdom of knowledge
    Is the courage to change
    darkness to light






    Submitted on 2004-04-16 08:57:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      welcome to the site!! put your poem in the box where it says "Strive to be original! Challenge...", right now it's where the description of your poem should be. just go to "Edit/Delete" on the right side. to your poem. it's nice. some really good images in there. I like that it's thought provoking.
    | Posted on 2004-04-16 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]


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