this is great!its funny how i can see a little of myself in you (and many others here) the kurt avvie kicks ass too. i liked the wording you came up with spur of the moment. the bear thing cracked me up too. good work! CJ
You are a crackhead of the deepest form and I don't think it's cool that you can write this goofy *ss sh*t when you're bored and sound better than half the stuff that I'm really focusing on. This was terribly interesting, what really drew me in was the "yo" in the title. Ah, the power of cheese, yo.
*growls like a bear* That made me laugh my pants off i enjoyed it... kinda childish in the beggining breaking off into seriousness... its very original I really enjoy your style its good and it makes me laugh and feel like i was 8 beacuse its that good... thanks for this laugh and writting... Keep writting and good luck
There are many styles of writing on this site and i try to pay attention to all of them, whether i prefer them or not. I don't prefer this piece, but you have to write what you feel whether anyone likes it or not lol!
'I did a poster on Canada I guess because you want to build a future there...'
its pretty creative to think that boredizm can bring out funny and dinamical point of views. the poem it self comes off as a low-tempered-vent / just throwing yourself on to the paper and into your work ../. and thats what i love about your work lori ... its artful, comical , and most of all emotionally original ... JWI