This is one of my favorites. I like the way the beginning catches the readers attention and holds it all the way to your final verse, which gives the reader warning to the danger as well as summing it up in a comfortable manner.
A very reverent and powerful lament about the risk we take with our passions. They lead to places that most humans wouldn't dare tread. A place where we might die for our passion.
Great poem, i like the deepness of it, like i'm inside your mind. LoveIt! keep up the good work. it has a care free feel to it and thats how writing should be.
Very nice structure and again, the rhyming was very good and not forced or strained. I enjoyed reading this - well done. You are coming on leaps and bounds - keep writing.
Submission Name: Everest (complete)
