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    dots Submission Name: In My Dreamsdots
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    Author: Geraldine
    ASL Info:    25
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 241/296/80
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 852
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    Description:
       Cheesy, I know, what can I say, I'm in love...lol..love makes us say and do stupid things!


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    dotsIn My Dreamsdots
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    In my dreams,
    I've found the place
    where happiness has built my home
    and love has made my bed.

    The moon gives promise
    of another beautiful day to come,
    and the sun shines down on me
    so much possibility.
    I see hope in the clouds
    and wishes in the stars.

    In my dreams,
    I've found him
    the one my heart has yearned for,
    the man I've searched my whole life for.

    He embraces me,
    his lips gently kiss my forehead.
    When I look into his eyes
    I feel weak in the knees.
    As he softly touches my face
    my heart skips a beat.

    He takes my breath away.

    When I awake from this dream
    I see him beside me
    and realize that my dreams
    have alas become reality.




    Submitted on 2005-09-07 16:08:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Love is never cheesy. You're simply expressing the love you feel in your heart, letting that love pour out onto written word. I found this lovely, and charming. It gives those of us wishing for this kind of love a splash of hope that it is true and one can find this love. Very sweet. I think I'll add this to my favorites. It seems I'm gaining a collection of love poems. ;)

    -Grey
    | Posted on 2005-09-08 00:00:00 | by Greyson | [ Reply to This ]
      This is not cheesy at all. It is a lovely poem expressing your obvious love for your true love. If you have found your one true love - then you are one lucky lady and one of an elite group.
    | Posted on 2005-09-07 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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