Description: yeah whatever im just tryin to vent here so if you comment make it simple plz
Wake up call -------------------------------------------
why u judgin me
am i not allowed to express my feelings and be free
what am i to you beside the dirt beneath your shoe
you dont like me because im not like you
but im glad because people like me are far and few
when i say something i mean it when i say i feel something i realy feel it.
to you i didnt do crap but you dont care about that
tryin to turn my mother against me cause you think shes blinded by love
but your wrong fool she got 20/20 vision she can see ahat you trying to do
but you hate so you try and demean me by calling me this and callin me that
you do all this thinkin shell never leave but your wrong cause she wont always be your boo.
Keep writing exactly how you feel and what is in your heart and mind. Beauty is always in the eye of the beholder. I thought it was a very impassioned and forthright piece of writing and well done for that, this makes it a good read.
ok gena srew wat solomon disease said even though if u mad it a poem it should be more emotional. but its not cuz the sturcture for a poem isnt there but if u make it a tid bit longer it would but oooooooooooooooooooooo gena u done dissed ur stepdad! oooooooo weeeeeeeee! anyway love ya sooooooooooooooooooo much! ~akaila evonne~