Description: I have such gratitude for this site and for, in the short, period I have visited here ~ the strength I have found in all of our words. We are suffering, enduring and altogether divine. The words our strength in All. Good, Evil, happy, sad love is veiled & revealed...love to friends and to enemies.
of us all;
hear the call...
of 1 mind;
of 1 kind...
words our bond;
wave of wand...
wishes & dreams;
not as seems...
It's spellbinding, really. And I think the intro, (which I usually feel takes away from the piece)actually ads to it, making it that much more. The images that came to me we're bountiful and lovely, in the likes of which i've not yet endured. thank you
This poem I'm awd by...The poem has a really good point inside of it...True that is about strength, and it's got a lot of points too, that even I chould take into consideration...I like Dakness;Light...I don't know why, I've always wallowed inside my darkness, but the light gives me hope...Nice work...
this is really very very very good!! i liked the pattern of the whole poem, u revolutionise the whole srtucture of a poem, i just can find one fault, cant u liven up the title a bit, u kno it'll attract more readers that way. but this is a real good poem, on my favs list!!!