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    dots Submission Name: Strengthdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 1015
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       I have such gratitude for this site and for, in the short, period I have visited here ~ the strength I have found in all of our words. We are suffering, enduring and altogether divine. The words our strength in All. Good, Evil, happy, sad love is veiled & revealed...love to friends and to enemies.


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    dotsStrengthdots
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    Brothers, Sisters
    of us all;
    Open hearts
    hear the call...
    Darkness, Light
    of 1 mind;
    He, She
    of 1 kind...
    Strength together
    words our bond;
    intuitive nature
    wave of wand...
    Fly free
    wishes & dreams;
    All "IS"
    not as seems...




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      It's spellbinding, really. And I think the intro, (which I usually feel takes away from the piece)actually ads to it, making it that much more. The images that came to me we're bountiful and lovely, in the likes of which i've not yet endured. thank you
    | Posted on 2006-03-25 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem I'm awd by...The poem has a really good point inside of it...True that is about strength, and it's got a lot of points too, that even I chould take into consideration...I like Dakness;Light...I don't know why, I've always wallowed inside my darkness, but the light gives me hope...Nice work...
    | Posted on 2004-05-08 00:00:00 | by Crestfallenman | [ Reply to This ]
      this is really cool, i like ti alot,
    wishes & dreams;
    All "IS"
    not as seems...
    Really liked that set of lines. really cool
    Pryncess
    | Posted on 2004-04-16 00:00:00 | by PryncessVynom | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this...It's hard to say something about this poem.. except it;s real good... I am looking forward to seein more of your work
    | Posted on 2004-05-11 00:00:00 | by Dark Angel | [ Reply to This ]
      this is really very very very good!! i liked the pattern of the whole poem, u revolutionise the whole srtucture of a poem, i just can find one fault, cant u liven up the title a bit, u kno it'll attract more readers that way. but this is a real good poem, on my favs list!!!

    Zu
    | Posted on 2004-05-03 00:00:00 | by Zu | [ Reply to This ]


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