How will it feel?
will it hurt you at all?
How will I deal
Even though I chose this fall?
Will you miss me?
When I’m not there?
Then you’ll see,
you don’t let go of something rare.
You’re the poison I chose,
Our time slipped away
No one really knows
It was the game I chose to play.
Will you miss me
Lying beside you in bed?
When you suddenly
Have me stuck in your head?
Will you miss the way I kissed you
The softness of my touch
What will you do
When you can’t find someone who loves you as much?
| This is a pure poem with it underline innocence,mixed with the harsh reality of life making tough decisions,even if your were truly sure of it.|
Love the poem for it purity
|| Posted on 2005-10-06 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ] || Thank you for your comment on my poem "God be with you all" I like this poem alot, I can relate to it totally and I write poems like this questioning my absence and future, past & present life is sooo full of questions yet none are answered but only the ones that are easy to figure out anyways thanx again and peace...||| Posted on 2005-09-14 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ] || aww, I am beginning to miss you myself lol j/k|
aww very sweet and cute this poem is. even trhough I have not done this in my life yet with any one, but I myself wonder if people will miss me for all the times I had been there for them, or what not.
peace and nice write
|| Posted on 2005-09-12 00:00:00 | by dudethis | [ Reply to This ] || I thought this one was good. The middle verses lost me a little, but all and all I'd say this was a nice piece. It's a really hurtful feeling having to say goodbye to someone. My heart felt your words, they were definately filled with emotion! Thanks for sharing this poem!|
|| Posted on 2005-09-08 00:00:00 | by Geraldine | [ Reply to This ] |