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    dots Submission Name: Will you miss me?dots
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    Author: AmandaLyn
    ASL Info:    18/F/ Centralia
    Elite Ratio:    3.59 - 292/292/42
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 236
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 666



    Description:
       this is like a sequel/ part two to summer romance


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    dotsWill you miss me?dots
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    How will it feel?
    will it hurt you at all?
    How will I deal
    Even though I chose this fall?

    Will you miss me?
    When I’m not there?
    Then you’ll see,
    you don’t let go of something rare.

    You’re the poison I chose,
    Our time slipped away
    No one really knows
    It was the game I chose to play.

    Will you miss me
    Lying beside you in bed?
    When you suddenly
    Have me stuck in your head?

    Will you miss the way I kissed you
    The softness of my touch
    What will you do
    When you can’t find someone who loves you as much?




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      This is a pure poem with it underline innocence,mixed with the harsh reality of life making tough decisions,even if your were truly sure of it.

    Love the poem for it purity
    | Posted on 2005-10-06 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ]
      Thank you for your comment on my poem "God be with you all" I like this poem alot, I can relate to it totally and I write poems like this questioning my absence and future, past & present life is sooo full of questions yet none are answered but only the ones that are easy to figure out anyways thanx again and peace...
    | Posted on 2005-09-14 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]
      aww, I am beginning to miss you myself lol j/k
    aww very sweet and cute this poem is. even trhough I have not done this in my life yet with any one, but I myself wonder if people will miss me for all the times I had been there for them, or what not.
    peace and nice write
    | Posted on 2005-09-12 00:00:00 | by dudethis | [ Reply to This ]
      I thought this one was good. The middle verses lost me a little, but all and all I'd say this was a nice piece. It's a really hurtful feeling having to say goodbye to someone. My heart felt your words, they were definately filled with emotion! Thanks for sharing this poem!
    Alissa
    | Posted on 2005-09-08 00:00:00 | by Geraldine | [ Reply to This ]



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