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Always forever

Author: K
ASL Info:    26/Namibia/Africa
Elite Ratio:    5.64 - 183 /172 /46
Words: 188
Class/Type: Lyrics /Serious
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Another soppy song written in 2003 for the songwriters' competition... This one did not make it onto the demo tape though. Hehehe!!!! I wrote it as a closing chapter to a friendship that started in the womb, 24 odd years ago. Any comments are always appreciated.

Always forever

Have you ever thought of me as the one who’ll stand by you?
Did you ever think of me as the one who’ll comfort you?
When you’re down and alone
And you need someone to hold
Baby, don’t be afraid
I am there with you

Always forever
I am by your side
In the memories of us together I still live on
So anytime you feel afraid
Just think of me
And I’ll be there
Always forever

Have you ever thought of me as your bestest friend? (I have)
Did you ever think that what we had was unique?
But now we’ve both grown up
And we’re no longer as close
That’s okay, it’s part of life
But as long as you believe


Baby we made so many plans
But somehow we drifted apart
And even if I don’t call
It doesn’t mean that I don’t care
Maybe you have replaced me with someone else?
Don’t feel guilty, don’t cling to the past
‘Cause I know that in your heart
There’s still a part of me

Chorus x 2

Submitted on 2005-09-08 00:12:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I think it would make a perfect song, one every human who has a heart can relate too and cry too..
i know that i would probably listen to it again and again right about now.. And since i'm in amood i won't make any other critiques based on the fact my emotions have the best of me at the moment..
thank you for sharing nik
| Posted on 2005-09-26 00:00:00 | by k.o.malley | [ Reply to This ]
  the bestest thing I didn't agree with.. and I also didn't agree with the long bridge.. maybe it could have been broken up into 2 parts... and been played to wrap the end of each repeating chorus..

But either way, I enjoyed the words and the message it brought.. not many people have the luxury of having what the character has in this song.. that's hard to come by so.. all in all i have to say.. keep writing
| Posted on 2005-09-08 00:00:00 | by daniel05 | [ Reply to This ]

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