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    dots Submission Name: To my oldest daughterdots

    Author: Dawnyd
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 149/80/32
    Words: 253
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       I was very young when I had my oldest daughter. I became very sick and almost died. My mother had to take care of her and when it was all said and done, she has tried to replace me, and it looks like she has won.

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    dotsTo my oldest daughterdots

    To my oldest daughter whom I love so much
    There are not enough words to express such
    I was to young when you came along
    My mom said you should abort, but I knew that was wrong
    You see I wanted you always from the beginning
    little did I know, your love I was not winning
    For now that my mother who wished you death
    now was the one whom wanted my breath
    When I became sick and could not walk
    She doesn't want to take care of her was all she would squawk
    If not for my dad I would be dead
    He took me to the hospital for months sick in bed
    It was then that she decided I'd be better off dead
    My true health history from the doctor was kept
    Then off to the campground you and she went
    Alone in the hospital, alone I wept
    I try to be close to you I try to make change
    The harder I try the more it stays the same
    I cannot make you love me, I know this is true
    But I have to stop hurting and always feeling blue
    So now I will step aside and leave you alone as you wished
    All alone I pray that you have no regrets
    For once I am gone I hope you will see
    Just how important you were, you are, to me
    May you find happiness in your life
    I pray that for you with all of my might

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