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    dots Submission Name: If Only For A Whiledots
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    Author: Geraldine
    ASL Info:    25
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 241/296/80
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 940
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    dotsIf Only For A Whiledots
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    Sadness is set aside,
    if only for a while
    Giving space for a new emotion,
    that of happiness.
    The tears are wiped away,
    if only for a while
    Being replaced by something gone so long unseen,
    that of a smile.
    The pain of heartache has healed,
    being mended by
    that of love.
    I will embrace these feelings,
    if only for a while,
    but will cherish these moments
    fo as long as I shall live.




    Submitted on 2005-09-08 09:46:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      In reading this..all I could think of was my boyfriend...and how when he finally gets to come home...he's in the military...that for that little time he's in my arms...I don't have to hurt anymore...and I try so hard not to take those moments for granted...because they are so few and far between. Like you said...it will be these moments..that I will never forget..and these moments that I will forever cherish in my heart. Beautiful write. ~hailie~
    | Posted on 2005-09-18 00:00:00 | by loveispain | [ Reply to This ]
      Nothing like grasping the moment ! When cupid calls and his arrow hits you between the eyes, make every second count and embrace the moment. Very good write - well done.
    | Posted on 2005-09-08 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      This is lovely. I like how you are consistent with your theme.

    I will embrace these feelings,
    if only for a while,
    but will cherish these moments
    for as long as I shall live.

    This is my favorite part. It's written very beautifully, and I hope to someday reach this point in life again (if only for a while).
    | Posted on 2005-09-08 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]


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