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    dots Submission Name: Silent Whisperdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       A dream I had last night - the voice which whisphers from our heart and soul is always speaking to us and though we don't always listen it never gives up on us ~ that LOVE.

    Love,Peace,Joy!!! tif ; )


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    dotsSilent Whisperdots
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    <@> hear
    the silent
    whispher
    of the
    unseen
    Guide,

    "Never
    is "IT"
    failure
    to have
    tried."

    "Keep on
    in Faith
    and in
    Love abide,

    For all
    the tears
    you have
    cried

    In times
    of sadness
    anger,
    pride...

    When in
    the face
    of Truth
    you lied;

    Your fear
    and sorrow
    groom and
    bride,

    Feeling life
    has crushed
    you beneath
    it's tide...

    I've kept
    my promise ~
    never left
    your side."




    Submitted on 2005-09-08 11:50:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, Tiff. this is really beautiful. It's like a love that has lasted. Always by your side.. I like that.
    It can also be seen as God never leaving your side.
    Either way...it's beautiful.
    I enjoyed.
    ~Sandra
    | Posted on 2005-09-11 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      This was written so beautifully. I love how you got so deep with this. I believe our hearts have control over our mind, even though we don't always know it. A heart is a very powerful thing, even more powerful that our mind! Anyway, now that I got deep...Great poem!
    Alissa
    | Posted on 2005-09-08 00:00:00 | by Geraldine | [ Reply to This ]
      I can relate to so much of what your saying here Tiff. Silent whispers, unseen guides, and everything else that goes with messages from our heart and souls. You are right, sometimes we don't listen - and sometimes we listen but choose not to hear. Hearts and souls are funny things - but they are always right.
    | Posted on 2005-09-08 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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