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    dots Submission Name: Silk Sheetsdots
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    Author: Geraldine
    ASL Info:    25
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 241/296/80
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 888
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 849



    Description:
       This guy has me thinking dirty thoughts all of the time!!! Don't read if easily offended!


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    dotsSilk Sheetsdots
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    I lay alone,
    wide open and exposed,
    on these cool, silk sheets
    visualizing your touch.
    My hands softly cup my breasts,
    as I imagine your eyes
    burning into mine.
    Slowly,
    I slide them down
    past my hips,
    sending shivers throughout my body.
    I can feel your touch
    as I part my thighs
    and gently begin to rub.
    Fingers inside,
    I can taste your lips on mine
    with one hand on top of the other
    my thrust become deeper,
    faster,
    harder
    until I can't take anymore.
    My back arches,
    as let out loud moans of pleasure.
    Taking a deep breath
    I can smell your sweetness in the air.
    I visualize your face
    while I lay alone,
    naked and exposed
    on these damp, silk sheets




    Submitted on 2005-09-08 15:31:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Weeeeellllll...Someone's been a very naughty girl. Don't you just hate how guys can make you do all these dirty, dirty things and love every minute of it? I am pleased that you have the gall to write a poem about such a terribly private experience. I have thought about doing it several times, but just never mustered the courage. Or the mood passes. Or I would rather just go do the real thing. Tsk, tsk to me. This was good.
    | Posted on 2005-09-15 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
      "Ahh poetic erotica-you captured the feelings with a great sensitivity and passion-I look foreward to seeing more-good work-Mugs-
    | Posted on 2005-09-13 00:00:00 | by mugsy | [ Reply to This ]
      wow i dont really noe y u would rite a poem about matubation but hey its ur life. i thought it was cute in its own sexual way. it was ok.
    ~akaila evonne~
    | Posted on 2005-09-08 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this poem. It captures the natural being of all humans and their emotions. I hope to see more poems by you in the future. I wouldn'd change a thing about this poem one bit it is perfect in every way.
    ~Krystina~
    | Posted on 2005-09-08 00:00:00 | by takenspiritwind | [ Reply to This ]
      Nothing wrong with some erotica - it's poetic too! That's nice you have someone who makes you feel that way even when they aren't there!
    Love and making love or masturbating while thinking about making love are all a part of it!
    Love,Peace,Joy! tif ; 0
    | Posted on 2005-09-08 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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