Description: Nice little lyrics which I would like some comments of any sort on... it can also be read as a poem so yeah... thank you
In this eyes -------------------------------------------
Why do you even tell me to wait anymore?
Let what was yesterday be that and no more
Why is there so much hatred coming through your pores?
Just let me explain all my points "mi amor"
I keep comming back like a dog to his owner
Every time happy hoping I stop being a loner
but then you pull those hopes from under
my hopes and dreams when you do that just plunders
But it's ok, it's alright, beacuse I dont hate you
It don't matter baby I'm so used to be used
To be thrown away when you are done playing boo
and when I step into a room now everyone calls me a tool
In this eyes you already see it
People say im a doormat and ive been it
If its broken dont fix it
and feed my soul to chickens
So why wait anymore?
So why care anymore?
Ill tell you why now hun
It's beacuse today I love you more
I love it. The last line is marvelous It's so sweet. I can kind of relate... I've been there before... Wish I wasn't though. Anyways... I have a favorite part, and since I'm all stuffed with tylenol and feeling much better now, I'll point it out.
"But it's ok, it's alright, beacuse I dont hate you It don't matter baby I'm so used to be used"
That really seemed to stick out the most for me... I don't know why though. I guess it's because I can relate to that part more than the rest.
Yup... Well, thats about all I can say. I'm not feeling very wordy right now. Very nicely done dear I love it
-nikkki
@>- lol look I made a flower. (I just remembered how to do that.)
i loved this poem (thats how i read it). very full of emotion and love. if this was for someone. i hope they come to u and feel the same way back to u. maybe she will soon...you never kno. but keep the good work up.
aww! That's sweet. Reminds me of that song "Self Esteem" by Offspring. You know you're being used, but you just don't care because you love the person thats using you. Hoping that someday they'll love you the same way too. Cute ~Kat
It's good. I realy like it, full of emotions and so much compassion. The only thing is that the lines could be broken up in different ways. Other then that I really like it. I hope to see more of your work in the future. ~Krystina~
Submission Name: In this eyes
It's so sweet. I can kind of relate... I've been there before... Wish I wasn't though. Anyways... I have a favorite part, and since I'm all stuffed with tylenol and feeling much better now, I'll point it out. 
