I love it. The last line is marvelous It's so sweet. I can kind of relate... I've been there before... Wish I wasn't though. Anyways... I have a favorite part, and since I'm all stuffed with tylenol and feeling much better now, I'll point it out.
"But it's ok, it's alright, beacuse I dont hate you It don't matter baby I'm so used to be used"
That really seemed to stick out the most for me... I don't know why though. I guess it's because I can relate to that part more than the rest.
Yup... Well, thats about all I can say. I'm not feeling very wordy right now. Very nicely done dear I love it
@>- lol look I made a flower. (I just remembered how to do that.)
i loved this poem (thats how i read it). very full of emotion and love. if this was for someone. i hope they come to u and feel the same way back to u. maybe she will soon...you never kno. but keep the good work up.
aww! That's sweet. Reminds me of that song "Self Esteem" by Offspring. You know you're being used, but you just don't care because you love the person thats using you. Hoping that someday they'll love you the same way too. Cute ~Kat
It's good. I realy like it, full of emotions and so much compassion. The only thing is that the lines could be broken up in different ways. Other then that I really like it. I hope to see more of your work in the future. ~Krystina~