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    dots Submission Name: Where Have They Gone?dots
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    Author: Poetic Cure
    ASL Info:    49.f.mn
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 313/137/33
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
    Total Views: 211
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1065



    Description:
       Feelings of dispair for the pets that were left behind in the wake of Katrina


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    dotsWhere Have They Gone?dots
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    Where have they gone?
    Calling and no one hears me.
    No smells or sounds of my family.

    What’s that noise?
    Loud roaring hurts my ears.
    Wind howling and water
    rushing to break in.


    Can’t get out of the four walls,
    that surrounds me.
    Feeling frantic now.

    Why did they leave me here?
    Alone and helpless,
    trapped in this space.


    Crying help falls on no ears.
    Can’t escape the rising waters.
    Objects speeding by,
    trying to hold on
    to this raging monster.

    I see the feline floating by,
    with no life left in her.
    Soon I shall join her.
    Exhausted from this battle I fear.
    One last whimper escapes
    my broken heart and forlorn soul.

    Darkness is now near.
    Spirits of my pals,
    beaconing me to join them.
    Letting the monster swallow me,
    for then I shall be free of this cage.

    Good bye my family……….




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      I really like your poem. I loved the theme, and your style is interesting, but what I liked most of all was how it evolved to the end. Good job. Keep writing.
    | Posted on 2005-09-08 00:00:00 | by AngeloftheVoid | [ Reply to This ]
      Helpless creatures in a helpless situation. Lovely words from a lovely creature about to lose their life. I admire your passion for cats and I applaud your words. It is gratifying to see someone speaking for members of this world who have no voice. Superb write !
    | Posted on 2005-09-08 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this poem alot. It is so full of compassion for those animals lost during that tradey. I only hope that it never happens again so we would not have to face the death of any kind.
    ~Krystina~
    | Posted on 2005-09-08 00:00:00 | by takenspiritwind | [ Reply to This ]



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