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Author:	bigfineq
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This is for all of us who were affected by Hurricane Katrina................you are not alone. Yes, we were treated unfairly by the response of government officials. We will make it!

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Once, a city full of life
blended by cultures
diverse by all means, now
a ghost town

A ferocious storm blew in
left her mark
everyone will recall the name
Katrina

After the winds died
all was well, so we thought
another disaster, so devastating
brought horror to all

Houses with only the tops visible
a safe haven for those stranded
dodging, the ever so rising water
waiting to be rescued

Families lost, displaced wandering,
surviving by anyway possible, hoping
someone please help us
time passed, no one came

Hope turn to desperation, leading
to degrading unspeakable acts
witnessed by all, and judged by many
Who is to blame

Labled as refugees, with
no place to call home
living as squatters
What will become of us and our city

A city now infested, unliveable
a floating tomb, portraying death
as never seen before
A city some wish to forget

In time, my beloved city
will rise again, shine brightly
Beautiful New Orleans
A city remembered

Wanda C. Tyler

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  I think you really inspired all to see the truth with that storm, but also you encourage all to believe as you New Orleans will recover and be even better than before. Because this was so personal, I won't even try and nitpick this. I will agree with the others and say this was very good. I was not there in Louisiana when all that happened, but it still hurt to see all that devastation. I hope now you are doing much better.

Maggie
| Posted on 2006-04-06 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
  This is intensely moving and beautifully expressed. Many in Britain were shocked by the US governments lack of responce and our hearts went out to the victims. I cannot even imagine the true horror but I'm sure that with people like you in time New Orleans 'will rise again' and 'shine brightly'.
shine brightly.
Comradenessie
| Posted on 2005-10-24 00:00:00 | by comradenessie | [ Reply to This ]
  I know I am supposed to give a longer comment than Amen, but what can I say here that you haven't? Re-state your lines? Not necessary... everything in this speaks for itself, and with more voice than any of my own repetition could give it. However, the only thing I know TO say to this, aren't my words at all, but I don't think Mr. Armstrong would mind me quoting him:

Do you know what it means to miss New Orleans, when that’s where you left your heart...

Take care going back there, and blow it a kiss from me when you're driving in... :)
| Posted on 2005-10-21 00:00:00 | by grey_girl | [ Reply to This ]
  Thank you. You have touched every topic that we are going through right now. And it's sad, you know. I mean there are some kind hearted people in the world I've found that out, but like always there are mean spirited people out there too. I'll have to tell you about it later. Hope your doing well and talk to you soon.

Babiejay
| Posted on 2005-09-25 00:00:00 | by babiejay | [ Reply to This ]
  I am New Orleans Born and Raised so all i can say is i was there and thankyou. With wisdom and restored hearts, we will build our city once again, better than ever. Great poem.
~ Yele
| Posted on 2005-09-25 00:00:00 | by Dalja | [ Reply to This ]
  This is a heartwrenching piece, that intricately articulates the horror that many innocent lives were subjected to due to the aftermath of KATRINA. This was a powerful write because it speaks for those marginalised civillians who will never be heard. Moreover, its sad that the US government was reluctant to respond in due time and not wanting to rebuild the town is prepostrous that they expect these people to forget their whole dreams and memories that this town bestows..Nevertheless, this was a very moving piece, it moved me immensely. I am glad someone articulated their unfortunate circumstances..This piece has been meticulously crafted and its level of realism is just unbelievable.Thank you for sharing...BE HAPPY..Nobantu
| Posted on 2005-09-15 00:00:00 | by Nobantu | [ Reply to This ]
  This you should post all over to encourage all of the victims of hurricane katrina. the poem will give them hope as well as strength to get the city back up and running to the point of where they used to be. All our hearts are with the victims of katrina and some of us show it more than others by donating anywhere from $1.00 up to $1,000,000+. The lovely city of New Orleans will rise again with our love for it growing and growing.
erin
| Posted on 2005-09-13 00:00:00 | by devonsmom03 | [ Reply to This ]
  Wanda,gthis really brings it all home. So powerfull,
emotional and ultimately devastating.

You know how I feel! I hope writing about it helped!

Love and God's speed!

Steve
| Posted on 2005-09-12 00:00:00 | by SHRINKSDR | [ Reply to This ]
  Wanda, this poem is captivating to say the least. Your words have painted a picture for me and I can almost visualize your homeland and see through your eyes the total destruction and tragedy there. Even though there is not much I can do to help, I can offer you and your family and loved ones all of my hearfelt sympathy and deep prayers. You have both of course, and I just wish I could do more...cher
| Posted on 2005-09-11 00:00:00 | by Inducted_Kitty | [ Reply to This ]
  This is very well written! My heart goes out to you and my prayers are with you! Such a horrific tragedy and devestating experience for you and so many to live through. I watch the news everyday and feel so awful about what has happened. I can only imagine what it must be like for you to actually have to live it. I hope that you and your family are well and safe and your friends too! I feel anger as well that the government didnt act a lot faster than they did. Lives could have been saved. God bless you Wanda. I hope you are well! Take care!

Lorna
| Posted on 2005-09-10 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
  this brought tears to my eyes.. to have witnessed such horror and devastation i cannot even imagine. i am happy to know that you have been reunited with your brother, and i will continue to pray for those missing and unaccounted for. such a beautiful city laid to waste, and i am ashamed of our government that continues to wage war in a foreign country while people on our own soil are dying and in need of care. it is a tragedy beyond belief.

my prayers are with you,
~Cat
| Posted on 2005-09-09 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
  I love pieces that honor events and people so its an insta favorite. the tragedy of the hurricane itself and it's aftermath is awful and things that i've heard going on there most horrific. yes the city will rise up again one day i hope to visit new orleans, it sounds like a beautful place with alot of history and mistique...great piece and wonderful dedication..thoughts, hopes and prayers for your family/friends,
mike
| Posted on 2005-09-09 00:00:00 | by inspirit999 | [ Reply to This ]

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