Description: i wrote this poem on october 1st 2004. i was in love wit this guy then.....stabbed me in the back......yea....so.....comment on what u want
Anger -------------------------------------------
what did i do
to deserve such pain
i dont kno but
im gonna stand on main
my life now sucks thanks to you
i dont feel like !million bucks
do you?
you shouldnt
you wouldnt
you should feel so f***ing guilty
you should feel so f***ing filthy
i love you troy
i bet shes just useing you
i would never troy
you should know this
because when you come
ill be gone
you got ur chance
but then you blew it
you know i feel like shit
i believed that you loved me
oh ya
you proved that didnt you...
id think not....
Wow nice pain in this poem which I has nice wording and its a nice work... I liked it and it flowed nicely... Whoever troy is it sounds like he just got him an enemy or something but it doesnt sound very good. well it was a good read and i hope you keep writting
I agree with scared i feel your pain that has to hurt fa real tho u should let this troy dude kno what he just lost and what an ass he is just to get it off your chest .BUt your piece is good honest and nothgin but raw emotion which is a good thing keep it up and i hope u feel better and sort out your issues life goes on there will be thousands of other guys u kno so smile ] BY the way i'm No Talent check out some of my work sometime
Submission Name: Anger
BY the way i'm No Talent check out some of my work sometime