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    dots Submission Name: Trinity Halodots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 25
    Class/Type: Prose/Nature
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    Description:
       Just a quick piece I jotted down while driving last night - the sun was setting and there were three distinct halos around it - the sunset just looked like a huge angelic/divine being! AWESOME!

    Happy Days!
    Love,Peace,Joy!!! tif ; )


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    dotsTrinity Halodots
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    The Divine was
    setting Sun
    Wings spread
    clouds afire

    A Blazing
    Halo
    of
    3

    Holy
    Trinity








    Submitted on 2005-09-09 15:16:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      NIce and simple
    the way I like things like this.
    I bet that sun sure was a beauty.

    And divine nature is indeed.

    ~shawn
    | Posted on 2005-09-09 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
      when you said jolted this down,while you were driving,i thought to my self oh no
    driving and writing at the same time(lol)
    till i seen the length.anyways.
    i love to look at something in awe.i dont get the chance often enough.one thing taht does it for me sometimes=is looking in the sky.so topic was nice,and youre wording made it better.
    would have like to have read more of youre perspective on,but you would have probably wrecked=cant have that so..cool

    later

    toyysruss
    | Posted on 2005-09-09 00:00:00 | by toyysruss | [ Reply to This ]
      In my mind, a setting sun always fills me with awe, wonder and a real sense of peace and satisfaction that yet another day has passed and I have been lucky enough to live that day and marvel as the sun lays its head on the pillow of the horizon. Just as fulfilling is when he rises and spreads his wonder for all the world to see. The rising and the setting of the sun is one of the very few spectacles that reaches out to, touches and affects everyone walking the earth. Nice to know Tiff you can do more than one thing at a time i drive and write a poem in your head !
    | Posted on 2005-09-09 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      simple and straightforward. it must have been a beautiful sight! it is amazing what we see in nature when we have our eyes and our hearts open.

    a glorious day to you, my friend.
    ~Cat
    | Posted on 2005-09-09 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]


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