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    dots Submission Name: Real love!dots
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    Author: fallen_angel384
    ASL Info:    17/Female/uk
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 59/87/22
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 255
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    Description:
       i wrote this when i had broken up wiv my x and thought my world would end i do miss him a lil but now i'm happy wiv my new bf and things are going well
    izzi x
    p.s i just thought i'd put it up to see how it does


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    dotsReal love!dots
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    You used to say you loved me,
    You used to say you cared,
    You used to be the one i ran to,
    When I was upset or scared.
    But ever since we broke up,
    All I've done is cry,
    I know this feeling I have for you,
    is real deep down inside.
    No matter what anyone says or does,
    I know it wont go away,
    Until I get you back,
    And you put an end to all this misery and pain.
    The pain is so unbearable,
    Somtimes I want to die,
    But all that I can do now,
    Is lay in bed and cry..




    Submitted on 2005-09-11 10:55:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Gr8 write... Its pretty much exacly how i felt wen my gf left me... Your a better writer than me lol
    | Posted on 2006-04-15 00:00:00 | by Henry666 | [ Reply to This ]
      Good write. Nothing worse than losing the one you love. But life has to go on regardless. I hope all works out well for you in the future
    | Posted on 2005-09-11 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      Yes I can relate to this write of yours. Very good. Could feel the pain as I felt when my ex left. Thank you for sharing with us your work. Keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2005-09-11 00:00:00 | by Poetic Cure | [ Reply to This ]



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