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    dots Submission Name: Help Medots
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    Author: AnointedPoetess
    ASL Info:    22/Fe/MN
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 127/178/49
    Words: 187
    Class/Type: Misc/Venting
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    dotsHelp Medots
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    Sitting here with a heart full of pain,

    My mind seems to be going haywire,

    Feeling so fragile yet ever so sensative,

    Is there anyone who will and can help me?,

    While never once hurting me with thier words,

    But only speaking words of pure love, care and deep concern,

    Tired of not being able to cope with life or its issues,

    Seriously wanting to run and hide away from the world and life altogether,

    Please come to my rescue and save me!,

    For i'm so very weak, weary, and slowly getting tired of this fight,

    That i somehow feel i am loosing,

    what happened to my fighting spirit or did that suddenly die too?,

    So frustrated that my life seems to be going no where,

    Yet afraid to make a move,

    Will someone help me please?,

    So confused in this world and just need some real release,

    Look inside and see how much help i really do need,

    So come, and please come soon and help me!.




    Submitted on 2005-09-11 14:27:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      THe biggest help you can ofrever find is within yourself. You should always carry the strength to walk just that little bit further...when you need assistance..the Lord will guide you...we all need help...but often we look in the wrong direction for the assistance.

    You have strength. You definitely do! Even though you don't see it...I do. You have always been strong.

    You have a wonderful heart. Don't ever let it go to waste!

    Much love.

    Li Li
    | Posted on 2005-12-08 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      I could feel your pain, fa shizzle...I used to think that my life was going nowhere...and running away never seems to work, at least that's what I hear...I would love to run away from my problems and never face them again!
    I could relate to this poem in some parts
    | Posted on 2005-09-12 00:00:00 | by Red Liquid | [ Reply to This ]


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