Dear rancid heart
As I write this
My self sufficiency ends
My dreams of horror
So grotesque
I feel as though my heart
In shreds does lie
You are my statement
My surreal
I feel you near me
Heart beating
The murmur of your throat
As you gurgle your last breath
And so dear heart
Now we must part
The chances flow by
In the river of rejection
As my blood boils
The turbulent aftermath
The statement made
My heart is broken
I cannot lie to you
My heart
Your time is over
There’s new tides
Boiling in the water
For what am I?
Without you
Betrayed and always weeping.
I Am Deeply Drawn to this piece. It reminds me of a pieces I have either read or written myself. I Love how your talk to your heart as if it can really hear you. One thing I myself Hate it but I got to point to out... Punctuation... I myself do not use it but It does drive me up the wall when others dont use it. Describing your heart as Rancid is pretty distinct dont ya think? It is good though. Rancid does discribes how some feel towards themselves. But If you truly feel as if you are grotesgue I can say I can truly relate to that too. Even though I must coat myself with the smiles and pretend everything is okay. Words are truly the only thing to be able to allow people to speak their minds. You did a fabulous job here... Take Care Jesi~
Submission Name: Rancid Heart
