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    dots Submission Name: What Do You Dodots
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    Author: Geraldine
    ASL Info:    25
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 241/296/80
    Words: 156
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 874
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    Description:
       thinking, anticipating, wandering....


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    dotsWhat Do You Dodots
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    What do you do
    when you're falling in love
    and you know
    that its much too soon?
    When just a single touch
    sets your heart aflame
    and sends your soul
    floating up to the moon?

    How can you tame a heart
    thats already been freed
    and has found a new place
    it wants to dwell?
    When the locks been broke
    and the walls come down
    and you know the pain to come
    will be such hell.

    Where should you hide
    when the truths been told
    and theres nowhere
    that you can go?
    When you fought so hard
    to keep emotions inside
    but your heart
    wants everyone to know?

    How can you protect yourself
    from being hurt again
    when your laying
    wide open to heartache?
    When you know that in time
    you'll be crying again
    and trying to deal with
    the pain of hear break.

    What do you do?




    Submitted on 2005-09-12 10:59:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      If you don't go for it and try it - you will never know ! Giving your heart is often fraught with danger and potential heartache, but that is what makes real true love such a holy grail that very few people ever experience.
    | Posted on 2005-09-12 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      Sweetheart, I wish I could give you the answer...lol. I love this poem. I can relate wholeheartedly to this poem. Good Job.
    | Posted on 2005-09-12 00:00:00 | by Mahoganii | [ Reply to This ]


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