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    dots Submission Name: Remembrancedots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
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    Description:
       There is so much we don't even know of our subconcious mind. I believe that we are, as is said, all in the image of God (or whatever you call "IT") and I don't think it's necessarily meant to mean our bodies (not in a physical sense) but our capacity for thought, emotion, etc.
    There is much within us we can tap into to......


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    dotsRemembrancedots
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    Not only can
    we remember
    but we
    recreate
    Love ~
    tis never gone
    in death;

    For as babes
    we live
    before we
    embrace
    our first
    human breath...

    Alive with
    no
    recognition
    we gauge
    days

    Not fully
    understanding
    part of us
    stays
    Divine,
    Infinite




    Submitted on 2005-09-12 15:33:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A very deep thinker you are! Sorry watched star wars recently...:P I'm reading it and I'm reading it again, just trying to grasp every meaning, but there are so many dang meanings that My mind is tripping over itself so I'll type what I got so far and give me a thumbs or thumbs down!

    A place I especially like was this part right here, it was one that I first truly understood and grasped. Yet I'm still sitting here pondering if I have it correctly.

    For as babes
    we live
    before we
    embrace
    our first
    human breath...

    I just like this little insert that it's not something any of us truly think about. Something that love and life put together can think and understand. The love of mother carrying life can understand this. I hope to reach this insight and feeling one day.

    this part here I liked

    Not fully
    understanding
    part of us
    stays
    Divine,
    Infinite

    I think this one over and over again, and I come to find that I'm back to square one again truly believe that it's highly non-understandable (if that's even a word) Adding the word divine was strange at first I didn't quite get it but what else can be infinte unless it's divine?

    While I was copying and pasting your line, I read the first part again and now I really like it...weird I know...

    Not only can
    we remember
    but we
    recreate
    Love ~
    tis never gone
    in death;

    I'm not sure but what I got from this is when someone is dead you remake your love for them. I remember when someone close to me died I didn't really show love to them and never put my full heart to them but sitting there all in black I created a new passion and love for them that I wished I had before.

    So all and all I love it. I tried to grasp it to my best ability! I hope I did it justice! Wonderful piece!

    Indelible_ink
    | Posted on 2005-09-17 00:00:00 | by Indelible_ink | [ Reply to This ]
      Divine and Infinite indeed Tiff.

    The memories that we have makes us who whe are, do they not?

    God lives in each and everyone and we have the choice to embrace it or not.
    Love is Divine and like you said after it is gone it really is never gone-even in death that love is still there.

    I am not sure if I go this right or not but thias is what came to mind as I read the poem.

    ~shawn
    | Posted on 2005-09-15 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
      it is all right here, inside of us, Divine love.. some lose sight in the chaos of the world. this is a beautiful reminder of the innocence and wonder we are born with. in times of stress and heartache, we can return to this comfort.. thank you for the reminder! you are always an inspiration.

    stay golden,
    ~Cat
    | Posted on 2005-09-12 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      Mind spirt body and soul...are they all one and the same. I think a good argument could be had saying they actually are. Nice write and plenty food for thought here.
    | Posted on 2005-09-12 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice, Tiff, no matter what your religion is, you can take inspiration from this.
    The divine "IT" the soul, the ever-living spirit...I believe.

    Thanks for reminding me

    Be Happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-09-12 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is an okay poem! i think more could be said in this poem, but other then that it is very good!
    I hope to see more work done by you in the future!
    ~Krystina~
    | Posted on 2005-09-12 00:00:00 | by takenspiritwind | [ Reply to This ]


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