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    dots Submission Name: S.W.A.T.dots
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    Author: uncreaTED
    Elite Ratio:    4.86 - 58/69/24
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       Through time the World has seen a succession of dominance. The Empires of the Middle East; the Orient. Seemingly invincible rule comes and goes repeatedly, as in 'The Rise and Fall of the Roman Empire'. Tyrants reach for the ring only to stumble in the end; Genghis Khan, Hitler . . . !

    Has America's imperial reign begun it's decline. Has arrogance and stupidity put the West on a roller coaster that is gradually running it's course and will fizzle? Compare the dollar to the Euro could anyone have thought the relationship would be so, a mere couple of years ago?


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    S.W.A.T.

    Seditious Wasp Antagonists of Today,
    Surreptitious presidential farce force.
    Imposing 'Marshmal..eflow Law.ef' by edict,
    So pale faces can control the dark side.

    Freedom has an exorbitant price tag
    When justice is administered by the dollar.
    Comfort conceals minorities away in squalor,
    Leaving the streets sanitized and pure.

    Dollars quietly vote, not the silent masses.
    Spin doctors create webs of fantasy
    That the gullible gobble like swine;
    Before becoming lambs ripe for slaughter.

    The august fathers of the constitution
    Squirm in their graves and agonize;
    Could one cowboy unraveled a utopia
    As wisdom sat on its hands in despair.




    Submitted on 2005-09-12 15:40:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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