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    dots Submission Name: Letter to Alldots
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    Author: DontSaveMySoul
    ASL Info:    20/m/cali
    Elite Ratio:    3.84 - 194/184/42
    Words: 192
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
    Total Views: 226
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1073



    Description:
       Too much shit in too short a period of time. I resolve one issue for another to arrise. Things got hopeless for a second...but hey, if I'm going to be my own God, I've gotta buck up, take charge, and deal with it like it should be dealt with. With unwavering power and determination.


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    dotsLetter to Alldots
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    Dear World...
    You have succeded in pestering me with trivial shit, and random irritations to the breaking point. Your total lack of concern for anyones well being is quite impressive. Your ability to take a person from top notch to bottom ring in a matter of moments is flawless.
    Thankfuly, I am of a different breed than most. Rather than sit, and mope, and brood over how horrible my life is, I'll simply finish this letter and move on. Rather than piss, moan and threaten to end my life like so many other half-serious fools, I'll go find something better to waste my time on.
    In the understanding that whatever productive activity I take part in will ultimatly be destroyed, I shall strive my hardest, that it be remembered. Also recognizing that any I love will hurt me, or I will hurt them, I shall love them with all my heart, as to enjoy what pleasure may be had fully.
    I do appreciate your efforts to run me over and beat me down, though. If nothing else, you made a solid attempt.
    No hard feelings...
    Paul




    Submitted on 2005-09-12 20:06:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hahaha.
    Thats funny, I never heard anyone else write a letter so... well it wasn't really raw good though. I think its Just talking about how your smarter/ not a fool... That you hate life but you don't mope around like other fools instead you do something that takes up time but doesn't help anything and thanking everyone for their bitterness towards you. Good job. cheers.
    | Posted on 2006-03-26 00:00:00 | by emoxday | [ Reply to This ]
      Huh, i like this. It is very raw and honest, but i think that is what i like about it. I also really liked the format, it's different and that's a good thing. I have felt that way many times and could never find the perfect words to express it, you did. Good job.
    | Posted on 2005-10-04 00:00:00 | by pms792005 | [ Reply to This ]



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