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    dots Submission Name: Comedy in Irishdots
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    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 398/490/159
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Riddle/Comedy
    Total Views: 859
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    Bytes: 325



    Description:
       You must read this poem with an irish accent. Can you spot how many references to a certain subject there are? You should find 8!


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    dotsComedy in Irishdots
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    Come Eddy let us now relax
    Sat ire in twirelight
    Yes sit wit me
    we'll hum our song
    am using hands to clap along
    Slap stick in time
    Please keep the rythmn
    of the line
    Jester moment
    Don't make a farce
    This irish accent is a curse!





    Submitted on 2005-09-13 10:33:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      lol, this was sweet and i did try with an accent but it didnt happen, and i dont see why having an irish accent could be a curse especialy for the men, personaly i find it i turn on lol, thanx for sharing#x x x
    | Posted on 2006-03-19 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]
      I think I found all eight (see PM). I don't want to give it away here. Very interesting piece of writing. It takes a dialect and uses it for purposes of humor and fun. Short and witty, with a built in puzzle. Not great literture, but it sure is fun. I enjoyed it.

    Phil
    | Posted on 2005-09-13 00:00:00 | by phil askew | [ Reply to This ]
      Satire?

    Is that one?
    Lol
    I needed something like this... about... 6 hours ago... but yeah... had nothing to help me then.

    but I giggled a bit trying to say this all with an irish accent...

    -Alli
    | Posted on 2005-09-13 00:00:00 | by Childoutspoken | [ Reply to This ]
      i'm afraid i will also need some help solving the mystery. i enjoyed this piece however, very fun how you suggested we read it with an irish accent.
    | Posted on 2005-09-13 00:00:00 | by Sweets | [ Reply to This ]
      well, i enjoyed reading it, and i enjoyed reading it in an irish accent, but i must confess, i have no idea what your octagonal mystery is...HELP!A
    | Posted on 2005-09-13 00:00:00 | by treybur | [ Reply to This ]


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