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    dots Submission Name: Masterpiecedots
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    Author: TechnoticQ
    ASL Info:    25/M/Royal Oak, MI
    Elite Ratio:    3.86 - 359/307/43
    Words: 167
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 238
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    dotsMasterpiecedots
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    They are the flowers in a world of fungus.
    The curve of their neck against my lips
    It consumes me.
    I want to sink my teeth into it.
    They truly are
    My truest obsession and my curse.
    I bow down and worship them.
    The grace they carry is overwhelming,
    The smell is intoxicating.
    I gravitate to it.
    Every cell springs to kinetic action.
    With every new one I taste
    I hunger for more- more- MORE.
    When I am without it
    I cannot function,
    Cannot hardly move.
    Without copulating with it,
    I desire only cold black death.
    So absolutely wonderful.
    Better than any drug,
    Better than anything.
    The soft, supple skin-
    My hands were made to hold it,
    Like the most precious fine china.
    I would never willingly ever
    Endanger or harm it.
    It can stomp all over me;
    Yet still I hunger for another heaping helping.
    I could never lose my romance or passion for it-
    God’s finest beauty,
    Finest creation,
    Most wondrous masterpiece,
    Woman.




    Submitted on 2005-09-13 12:13:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I must say, I've been browsing your words and I like. You definitely have a way with paper and writing utensil. I can certainly relate to this work ( what self respecting penis couldn't ) the imagery is very involving, makes me salivate just thinking of the many flavors mmmm...
    anyway this probably is not my favorite piece of literature by yourself so far, only because maybe it runs a little shallow compared to some of your other works but overall, very well put. I look forward to perusing more of your writes.

    Milo
    | Posted on 2005-11-10 00:00:00 | by Milo shanley | [ Reply to This ]
      Hell yeah! This is a wonderful addition to this challenge. I have read many from this challenge and this one is definitely awesome...and I dont just say that because I am a woman. This is so sensual and full of passion. Your words speak as if I could feel the breath on my neck, they are so descriptive and full of a lustful desire. You really give the reader a sense of your feelings throughout this poem. It is very well written and expressed. Excellent!

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2005-10-26 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      Aiee. You rule, Techy! This is brilliant, not at all what I expected...then again, it is something I'd think you would write. Brilliant, as usual, meh luff. You pwn, Q. Your detail was incredible, and the compliment to women is always vereh welcome. -dances- Some of the guys out there are alright too though. -pokes you- Keep writing, and lovely response to the challenge, i might say. I still have to finish my own. O.o
    ~Sicobe R. Crow
    | Posted on 2005-09-14 00:00:00 | by Crow | [ Reply to This ]
      dude this is [censored] great man, you are right god's materpiece was women, can live wothout them, i loved the way you decribed everythings
    int his poem, you have a great skill i'm glad you use it.
    | Posted on 2005-09-13 00:00:00 | by withblindedeyez | [ Reply to This ]
      Amazing. The detail is very vivid and yet it works! I like due to the description of the female! I hope to see more work by you!
    ~Krystina~
    | Posted on 2005-09-13 00:00:00 | by takenspiritwind | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, lots of detail. I like lots of detail. And appreciate the compliment to women, :).
    Its good to know that there are people out there who appreciate women for who they are instead of what they could be.
    | Posted on 2005-09-13 00:00:00 | by Elissar | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice I have never read poem about flowers soooo detailed! Then read the woman part and kinda figured that was where you were goining, and I agree women are da greatest gifts on this forsaken earth! However men are too ;)
    | Posted on 2005-09-13 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]



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