Description: I ended up with a sticker on my ars after tech theatre class that said Fragile, handle with care. Then went to class with the rest of the sheep I tend to be flocked with and had a giant debate in the middle of a math test. thus this poem was born along with another.
Fragile-handle with care- -------------------------------------------
Living in a black world of today
Hiding who I am
-what I want
-what I know
For the sake of who?
Them it would seem.
Those who do the same.
But for who?
Lonliness weighing on me like a brick
Never accepted for who I am
Because I hide.
no longer in the shadows
But the light.
Screaming to be heard
And still I am not seen
we don't realise
they're just like me.
Please, let me die
Because those who don't like me
Don't even know me.
Parish in the everlasting sins they never saw me commit
But claim I did none the less.
What does it take to not be hurt?
A sticker placed upon my person
Please world! Please!
I am fragile
This is a powerful write A lot of your fellow teens should read this knowing where another teen is coming from I encourage you to talk with maybe your school newspaper and ask them if you could put this write in there If you dont want them to know who wrote it just sign it anonymous I Believe this would open up some eyes A very well written and meaningful poem Take Care Ron
your right with this being something what a teen would write ...hiding in the shadows screaming so you can be heard or seen and no matter what you do no one notices you are ignored for most of your life ending up in a depressed state...this has to do with a teen's life almost everyday and of course i love peaces that speak about whats real i love the structure of the poem and how you let the words just keep flowing its pretty well done Please, let me die Because those who don't like me Don't even know me. That stands out the most in this poem made it stand out a bit anyway on the whole pretty good
We are all fragile. 'speshaly our asses. lol. [yourdadlovesthecock] just signed on and it made me think of you for some reason...lol. But bakk to the poem. I hart this sarah bara. Like hardKore. Like Woah nigga. Like I well...I hartttt ittt. <33
I enjoyed the beginning of the poem Living in a black world of today hiding who I am what I want what I know This to me makes a strong point The people who live in the dark are the ones who allow themselfs to be cheated out of the life they are put here to live The teasing tormants from other people are only there to remind you that you are better... You should not judge yourself in the eyes of the strangers but judge yourself in the reflection of the eyes who love you.