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    dots Submission Name: Fragile-handle with care-dots
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    Author: Sarah Leger
    ASL Info:    15.f.kissimmee,Fl
    Elite Ratio:    3.74 - 436/387/80
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 959
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 876



    Description:
       I ended up with a sticker on my ars after tech theatre class that said Fragile, handle with care. Then went to class with the rest of the sheep I tend to be flocked with and had a giant debate in the middle of a math test. thus this poem was born along with another.


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    dotsFragile-handle with care-dots
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    Living in a black world of today
    Hiding who I am
    -what I want
    -what I know
    For the sake of who?
    not me.
    Them it would seem.
    Those who do the same.
    But for who?
    not me.
    Lonliness weighing on me like a brick
    Never accepted for who I am
    Because I hide.
    no longer in the shadows
    But the light.
    Screaming to be heard
    And still I am not seen
    we don't realise
    they're just like me.
    Please, let me die
    Because those who don't like me
    Don't even know me.
    Parish in the everlasting sins they never saw me commit
    But claim I did none the less.
    What does it take to not be hurt?
    A sticker placed upon my person
    Please world! Please!
    I am fragile

    -handle with care-




    Submitted on 2005-09-13 12:32:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a powerful write
    A lot of your fellow teens should read this knowing where another teen is coming from
    I encourage you to talk with maybe your school newspaper and ask them if you could put this write in there
    If you dont want them to know who wrote it just sign it anonymous
    I Believe this would open up some eyes
    A very well written and meaningful poem
    Take Care
    Ron
    | Posted on 2005-11-22 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      your right with this being something what a teen would write ...hiding in the shadows screaming so you can be heard or seen and no matter what you do no one notices you are ignored for most of your life ending up in a depressed state...this has to do with a teen's life almost everyday and of course i love peaces that speak about whats real i love the structure of the poem and how you let the words just keep flowing its pretty well done Please, let me die
    Because those who don't like me
    Don't even know me.
    That stands out the most in this poem made it stand out a bit anyway on the whole pretty good
    | Posted on 2005-09-16 00:00:00 | by wallya20 | [ Reply to This ]
      We are all fragile. 'speshaly our asses. lol. [yourdadlovesthecock] just signed on and it made me think of you for some reason...lol. But bakk to the poem. I hart this sarah bara. Like hardKore. Like Woah nigga. Like I well...I hartttt ittt.
    <33

    Fukk Love from Within.
    =]
    | Posted on 2005-09-14 00:00:00 | by Thinkingofyou | [ Reply to This ]
      I enjoyed the beginning of the poem
    Living in a black world of today
    hiding who I am
    what I want
    what I know
    This to me makes a strong point
    The people who live in the dark are the ones who allow themselfs to be cheated out of the life they are put here to live
    The teasing tormants from other people are only there to remind you that you are better...
    You should not judge yourself in the eyes of the strangers but judge yourself in the reflection of the eyes who love you.
    | Posted on 2005-09-13 00:00:00 | by mandy dupuis | [ Reply to This ]


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