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    dots Submission Name: smokers haikudots

    Author: sbridges
    ASL Info:    33/F/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 119/119/63
    Words: 14
    Class/Type: Haiku/Longing
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       I hope this isn't just for smokers, :)

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    dotssmokers haikudots

    The feeling I got
    Whole and clear like a bubble
    Enough for a while

    Submitted on 2005-09-13 14:09:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i LOVE it
    pure and simple, i love it
    it relates to your title
    and it speaks the truth
    and i got badgered a while ago that haikus are supposed to be bright and uplifting and about nature, but u didn't do it either! awesome
    | Posted on 2006-07-06 00:00:00 | by sailorliones | [ Reply to This ]
      Everyone will read this poem and have their own interpretation of it. I like this poem because it relates to me. I interpreted the poem to be about a person who is infactuated ( don't know if that's spelled right) with another being. and just being around that person, even if you've never said a word to them about your feelings can some how satisfy your cravings for them. I can come up with alot of different interpretations of this poem. Well written. I look forward to reading some more of your work.
    | Posted on 2005-10-06 00:00:00 | by Jac | [ Reply to This ]
      I think its the feeling of getting buzzed off of a blunt or something... nice making me think and putting great visuals in my mind

    this was a good haiku for the good thinker and i would like to see more like this

    thank you for it and please keep writting
    | Posted on 2005-09-13 00:00:00 | by josymanthegreat | [ Reply to This ]

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