i LOVE it pure and simple, i love it it relates to your title and it speaks the truth and i got badgered a while ago that haikus are supposed to be bright and uplifting and about nature, but u didn't do it either! awesome
Everyone will read this poem and have their own interpretation of it. I like this poem because it relates to me. I interpreted the poem to be about a person who is infactuated ( don't know if that's spelled right) with another being. and just being around that person, even if you've never said a word to them about your feelings can some how satisfy your cravings for them. I can come up with alot of different interpretations of this poem. Well written. I look forward to reading some more of your work.