Oh.. uhm. Its different? I don't see any romantic-ish feeling involved in this or perhaps there is but you have to rack your brains real hard and try to search. Maybe someone thinks this is the perfect act of love there is. Maybe or.. well anyway you did seem to set yourself apart from others.
Raw. I can see in your work a very raw and ready talent. I would like to thank you. I have many short poems that I have not posted here because so few people can enjoy them. I see you pave the way and I applaud! BRAVO!! I love the way this hits back, and I can say that I do look forward to reading more form you. I do hope that you don't take anyone's commentary personal and that you remember the first key of poetry,poetry is personal observations expression truely revealing yourself. At least that is what I think of. Welcome and keep up the great work.