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    dots Submission Name: Blood of Lifedots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 684
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    Description:
       I may have posted this before as I believe it I wrote it this summer but couldn't remember and I came upon it today and felt like posting it or re-posting it?~?~?~ (can Alzheimers hit at 35?!)

    I also am trying, for the first time, the alignment codes so I hope it works?!

    Love,Peace,Joy!!!! tif ; )


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    dotsBlood of Lifedots
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    As <@> blow bubbles
    2 float away troubles
    on the wind

    <@> pray 2 reflect
    Great Spirit

    from within


    In the heat of the Sun
    <@> am renewed

    by the water

    of sin

    Now is not where
    I'm going or

    where I've

    been


    Daughter of God
    not son

    of

    men


    Blood of Life
    flows through

    my

    pen...




    Submitted on 2005-09-13 17:12:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      another great piece i like the title is why i chose this one
    i am not sure about the symbols but this is a geat topic and once again you posted a great read
    i am not writing as much as i used to getting tired of it
    thanx for your comments much appreciated
    take care
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-09-20 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      :) Back to the symbolic verbage? No not verbage............but whatever :) Nice bit 'o writing If I do say so myself! WooHoo And such or something!
    | Posted on 2005-09-20 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]
      Blowing bubbles to float away troubles.. Now, I like that..
    This entire piece feels uplifting, and trouble-free as well.
    And I can certainly understand the last part.. the blood of life flowing through your pen.
    A nice write.
    Enjoyed!
    ~Sandra
    | Posted on 2005-09-14 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice format, I've never seen it like this before so it was interesting. Not something I'd do myself probably but still, good to see that others are thinking up of original ways to express themselves at least...
    | Posted on 2005-09-13 00:00:00 | by The Imbroglio | [ Reply to This ]
      short and blunt.
    it sounds like a pray someone would say, sorta. your use of words were a bit strong, which is good.
    but i'm not a big fan of stuff this short.
    its ok.
    3/5
    | Posted on 2005-09-13 00:00:00 | by Adia | [ Reply to This ]
      And a mighty pen it is ! I got the impression of passing through on the journey of life, reflecting, evaluating and moving on.
    | Posted on 2005-09-13 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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