Deep

Author: the apocrypha Elite Ratio:    3.37 - 185 /192 /48 Words: 52

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Deep

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Silhouettes dansantes Sur les rideaux À minuit Chants are aimlessly wandering Through the city Sobs are softly sinking In concrete walls In hunger, the night Is silently stalking For those miseries Comme la lumière des étoiles Qui se noie dans la mer The small hours are starving For depsair

Submitted on 2005-09-14 04:18:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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This just sounds so very enchanting even though I only understand half of it since it is in a foriegn language...But that makes it more mysterious. -Lindel

| Posted on 2005-09-14 00:00:00 | by LRRolins | [ Reply to This ]

It's a lot to grasp in a such a short poem. It does make you wonder however, what exactly you are talking about. Me, I like to be stumped in a sense but only if I can figure it out later. People don't like to be confused. I think you should go fill in a few blanks and be a little more concrete instead of abstract.

| Posted on 2005-09-14 00:00:00 | by FoxxyRoxxanne | [ Reply to This ]

Just a few questions to fill in the blanks! What miseries are wondering? I want to know more it just seems too short. ~Krystina~

| Posted on 2005-09-14 00:00:00 | by takenspiritwind | [ Reply to This ]

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