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Instinctive Dialect

Author: realpassion
ASL Info:    27/Male/Nigeria
Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 81 /70 /50
Words: 60
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Instinctive Dialect

The tongues of men
know not I sincerely.
But your dialect reflects
From my speech like diamant'e earrings.
When the tongues of men I sought to acquire
The loves' dialect instinctively
Bubbles from my speech uniquely...

Submitted on 2005-09-14 07:26:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I guess I'm a bit confused on what the subject is about. It dose have some good discriptive words. Wish I understood what it was referring to. Probably just me. Was a bit short.
Well keep up the writng. God Bless
| Posted on 2005-09-14 00:00:00 | by Poetic Cure | [ Reply to This ]

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