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    dots Submission Name: The Monster Mashdots
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    Author: Poetic Cure
    ASL Info:    49.f.mn
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 313/137/33
    Words: 220
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 253
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1558



    Description:
       People I work with.......

    Would like to hear if any one else deal with these kind of people.


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    dotsThe Monster Mashdots
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    Work is full of mixed up minds.

    Supervisors with blinders,
    hoping not to see slimy species,
    crawling the floor of his area.

    CEO hurriedly passing by,
    head buried in his chest.
    Fearing someone might
    catch a glimpse
    of his deceitful eyes.
    Hoping to return to his room
    before the truth of his existence
    spews over the floor.

    We have the Frankenstein's,
    who know "NOTHING".
    Nuts and bolts falling from their head.
    Egors limping behind with silly grins.

    Then there is the Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde
    complex syndrome for many.
    Blowing tops of their heads one minute,
    and the next picking up the pieces.
    Stuffing it back any which way,
    mean while laughing loudly
    to blanket the insanity.

    Einstein's is another mind to fear.
    Walking around with over large heads.
    Wobbling on those spindles they call necks,
    professing the knowledge of all.
    Slamming any one who dare question.

    Lets not forget the odd fellows,
    with their heads so far up the bosses ass.
    Hoping for more favors to explore.

    Watching this mixed mush of minds,
    reminds me of the Song "Monster Mash".
    As I sit here pondering what I just wrote,
    wondering what monster do I play,
    in this place of mixed up minds..........
    .







    Submitted on 2005-09-14 14:37:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is good...interesting metaphor, very intelligent, never woulda thought of coworkers being like that...better hope none of em are on here lol, could be trouble at the Monster MAsh.
    good stuff, 5 Stars

    Storm
    | Posted on 2005-09-14 00:00:00 | by OrionsStorm | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh my. I work at a mental hospital and my co-workers are sometimes worse than the clients so I hear what your saying. This was very good and paints a picture of what most people see every day.
    | Posted on 2005-09-14 00:00:00 | by 3TOMANY | [ Reply to This ]
      I have dealt with people like these before, they all make up the big melting pot of the office place but you forgot to mention the backstabbers. Nicely described, very keen.
    | Posted on 2005-09-14 00:00:00 | by Silent Syn | [ Reply to This ]



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