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    dots Submission Name: Silencedots
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    Author: Drizzt
    ASL Info:    18/M/CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.25 - 141/154/32
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Something I wrote about in creative writing, the topic was silence, and for a couple weeks we had been arguing about how silence could be classified as a sound (it can, we proved it scientifically). this has nothing to do with that however, its just a small piece i did based on silence :)
    -drizzt


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    dotsSilencedots
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    Ah, Silence.
    My favourite sound--
    For it is indeed a sound--

    It is the tension between enemies,
    The passion between lovers,
    It is the voice of a god,
    As well as the prayer asked of him,
    And sometimes, it is his answer.

    It is the sacred moment before the unholy,
    And the unholy secret behind the sacred;
    The sentient being that grips us in terror,
    Or in protection.

    It exists as a space between.




    Submitted on 2005-09-14 17:06:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I would say that you brought silence to life here. You've taken something often overlooked, and neglected and created a piece that gives depth to something that is taken for granted.

    Silence really is something, it is amazing the lengths some people will go to find it or avoid it. Silence can mean so many different things.. often people who are overwhelmed by emotions resort to the complex simplicity of silence. I have been in silences of anger, passion, fear and probably many I can't explain. It never really occurs to you at the time, but silence can really say a lot.

    I enjoyed this immensely. Thank you very much.
    | Posted on 2005-09-15 00:00:00 | by waffuru | [ Reply to This ]
      This was good. Silently to the point!lol

    See creative writing get your mind to thinking, and then you can apply your knowledge of thought on this site. I love to read creative writimgs. It's so debate prong! What I see and feel thru a creative writing piece might not be what the other person see or feel. On top of everything our way might be totally different from the author's point of view. That I like. This was good. You continue to write...take care, wanda
    | Posted on 2005-09-14 00:00:00 | by bigfineq | [ Reply to This ]
      me gusta. well first let me comment on how kick ass a class creative writing is. anyway. i really liked the 2nd stanza, but then i read the 3rd, and that def was like woah. what im really trying to say is that its a really good piece, and i like how you got the reader to think really about silence. uber kudos
    ~sandra~
    | Posted on 2005-09-14 00:00:00 | by Dimension_X | [ Reply to This ]



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