Description: This is a pretty bad poem that I wrote. I wrote it during math class (again). So yeah, this is a poem about how you love someone a lot, than you lose them all of the sudden from a sudden event. Like them dying or breaking up with you. So here is "Once thy love"
- Nammy
Once thy Love -------------------------------------------
The conept of love
oh how I see through it
Soft as new snow
The concept, renew it
Tell me what you know
Tell me why you threw it
Tell me something please
oh that, already knew it
Eyes ablaze
And now I'm pissed
Amazed
Just how the ligths
Shown through
Shown the tinted red
of the heartswe once had
our first kiss on twelfth street
A memory I still have
Now that place
So sacred in my heart
Now flooded with blood
From one shattered heart
I think I know why you are pissed. I just went through a break up that wasn't expected and we both still love each other and that really pissed me off. I hated him at first for doing this right after we finally confessed our love to each other. I like it. I can relate.
Like the person above I too didn't understand the bit about you being pissed. I did however, like your poems rhythm & feel especially in the last stanza.
Submission Name: Once thy Love
